Nov
29th
2015
A Question for Everyone Who Liked A Night of Fun · 4:48pm Nov 29th, 2015
What did you guys like most about it? I'm definitely going to write the sequel to the story (Everybody seems to want one) but I'd like a little bit of direction on what to focus on. Did you like the exhibitionism, the femdom, the "forced" masturbation? Be specific as it'll help. I have a few more fleshed out fics that I'll be pumping out first but any input you guys have will be much appreciated.
I enjoyed the femdom, mainly. But the "forced" masturbation was good as well.
I would like to see it continue in the bedroom, with Twilight taking advantage of Moondancer's willingness to do anything for her. Maybe have Twilight use a strap on(Futa) To finish both of them.
I liked both the exhibitionism and the forced masturbation, but I feel the "heart" of the fic so to speak is in the femdom.
Personally I think you should just do what you feel is right and not worry too much about pleasing your readers. I will answer your question though. Exhibition, which was nicely complimented by the masturbation.