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  • 79 weeks
    Patreon

    I will be opening a Patreon for those who want access to chapters early. Keep in mind its not required and I will always eventually post the chapters on here and other sites for free. But some support will help so I don't have to overwork at my second job for money.

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  • 188 weeks
    Discord!

    For those who wish to chat with me. I have a discord.


    9/16 th The link has been updated now.

    https://discord.gg/HKEUVc3G



    Anyone is free to join and invite your friends as well.

    I am going to try and use the Discord more for those who want to contact me about their original character submissions or story ideas.

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  • 202 weeks
    Broken Images/Pictures are being fixed.

    been going through the chapters and fixing all the broken links for images. So far first 75 fixed and will continue fixing more in the following hour.

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  • 203 weeks
    Looking for an Artist!

    Now that I'm back to doing chapters I need an artist. If anyone can do anthro art message me and I'll review them. Willing to do 5 to 10 dollars an image and I would be asking for tons of images.

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  • 217 weeks
    Equestrian Heroes chapter post pushed back to 2/19

    Pushing back the post a few days to proofread and add more content. Its my intent to hurry up and finish this arc so we can finally get to the end parts of season 3. I know some of you have been dying to get into season 4 so I'm working to see that a reality.

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Nov
23rd
2015

Submit your Original Characters. (Fourth iteration) · 6:56pm Nov 23rd, 2015

You can send either new original characters or resubmit updated/remixed versions of your previous original characters you sent with updated information.

Comments ( 16 )

Do we private message the character or post it here on the blog?

3563962 Post it in the blog.

Name: Jay Shadows.
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Species: Unicorn.
Cutie mark: sword on a flaming shield
Coat color: Black with red stripes down spine that look like claw marks and red marks across muzzle
Mane and Tail: Red
Eyes: Gray
Personality: Confident but reserved.
Occupation: Lunar Guard

Comment posted by KyniTheGaurdian deleted Dec 16th, 2015

Name: Arctic Night
Species: Pony
Kind: Pegasi
Gender: Stallion
Birthdate: 12/21/98
Age: 23
Height: 6.1 feet
Weight: 175
Body shape: Mesomorph

No allergies or scars.

Mane and tail: Raven form and silver colored
Coat color: Natural Blue
Eye color: Gold-yellow
Cutie mark: Red shield with a yellow outline and a white star in the center of the shield.

Clothes: He wears a white T-shirt under his black hoodie, black fingerless gloves, blue jeans and grey trainers.

Cloudsdale High, diploma: Organization - Assistance.
Manehattan's college, diploma: Psychology and Art

Work: creating snowflakes at the weatherfactory in Cloudsdale.

Skills: fast and an agile flyer (not as fast as Rainbow or the Wonderbolts.) good swimmer, he can draw very good, plays the piano and a good fighter but he wants to become better and starts following defense lessons lead by Naruto.
Personality: very kind and helpfull to others. Doesn't judge anyone based on rumors or different species. He tries to see things from a different perspective to understand the situations better.

Likes: flying, music, art, juwels, the night and winter.
Dislikes: He doesn't like last minute changes but he obeys. Takes things to literally sometimes

His home: Ponyville, lives in Ponyvilles millow.

Family: He's an orphan
Friends: Minuette, Lyra, Bon Bon, Vinyl, Octavia and Time Turner. He knows the mane 6 but he hasn't talked with them... yet.
Special somepony: He's single but he has a huge crush on Octavia Melody. (Maybe you can make then a couple? Unless you ship VinylxOctavia?)

His dream: Joining the guard.

I was thinking if I should submit one or not. In the end I chose to do it.

Made a few edits thanks to the new "Equestrian Heroes Terms". Mainly a couple of abilities which were part of the Thestral sub-species. 14/1/16

Name: Crystal Gazing

Nicknames: The Seeress, Doc or Crys.

Date of Birth: December 28th 1994 AD.

Age: 30

Height: 5’5

Weight: 138

Kind: Unicorn (Thestral sub-species)

Gender: Female

Mane: A pale silver-blue color, kept in a long braid that she wraps around her neck.

Coat: Blue

Eyes: Green (as is her magical aura.)

Scars, Allergies, and Illnesses: She stores a high amount of magic at a quick rate and suffers headaches if the magic is not released at regular intervals of time.

Accessories: A traveling cloak, an old looking book and a bracelet with four small pendants in the form of a silver star, a mocha cup, a small sapphire that looks like a tear (which represents her family's cutie marks) and a Crescent moon (which represents her devotion for the Moon Princess.).

Chest Measurement: 34 D
Waist Measurement: 24
Hip Measurement: 36

Cutie Mark: Crystal ball with a quill inside.

Occupation: Historian and archaeologist for the Canterlot University and wandering fortune teller (while traveling she usually is dressed as a gypsy. Except on archaeological expeditions)

-Education-
Graduate of CSGU (Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns.)
Minor in Culinary Arts
Bachelor’s on Magical theory and Ancient History and Languages.
Master’s in Divination, Illusory magic, Anthropology and Equestrian Mythology and Folklore.
Doctorate in Archaeology.

Personality: While a mare of adventures on the inside, Crys travels the world in search of legends, tales and artifacts lost to time. She is traveling and writing a book about the current events of the world to be stored in the Royal Library or Canterlot University for future generations, specially those that involves the Elements and those around them. Crys is very diligent with her work, which includes searching, deciphering and writing about past events, ancient artifacts and lost folklore, and wishes to someday get a work as a scribe to the Equestrian Princesses, or get a work in the Royal Library as an Archivist. Crys has a rather serene behavior, but can also be a tease sometimes, which she uses while doing her fortune telling, but she can get rather absorved in her own world while doing research or writing on her book, which she calls "My life, your life, our lives".

-Skills-
Illusory magic: It can be in the form of the most simple magic illusion for kids to the most real looking vision to scare anyone.
Elemental magic: She has above average skills with the elemental forces of magic. Her natural magical inclination is with ice, which can manifest in the form of being cold to the touch, lower body temperature and decrease in environment temperature.
Combat: She mostly use illusions to confuse her enemies, but is good at hand to hand combat and ice magic.
Historical knowledge: Crys has a deep knowledge of both current and ancient Equestrian history.
Gift of Foresight: Can see into the future. Her predictions are few and far between, but the more important ones are in the form of glimpses instead of a full vision which means she doesn't known everything that will lead into that future.
Echolocation and Night vision: Both senses are augmented thanks to her thestral descent.
Diligence: She always tries her best in her work or her fortune telling.

-Family-
Family – Name – Occupation
Mother - Star Sight - Former traveling performer/Housewife
Twin sister - Mocha - Owner and barista at a popular cafe in Canterlot named "Starry night".
Father - Morning Dew - Deceased. Former member of the Royal Guard.

-Other traits to Original Character-
She spend most of the time with her eyes closed, that doesn't mean she doesn't open her eyes from time to time, but she can use her natural echolocation ability to find her way.
Rumor among ponies is that the wandering Seeress possesses a third eye in the centre of her forehead, just below her horn. If this eye is an illusion or the third eye is real is only known by Crys herself. Most of them think this is the source of Crys' visions about the future. (Imagine Kaguya's or Madara's third eye)
Loves reading legends of the past.
Sharp minded
Patient with other ponies.
Wants to leave a mark in history either by making a huge archaeological discovery or once she finishes her book and get it published. She hopes that the book she is writing can help future generations to understand the past.
Crys sufferend from Athazagoraphobia (fear of being forggoten) in early fillyhood. Thanks to psychological help she overcame the fear.
Has thestral descent from her mother's side. Is very proud of her heritage as a Moon Child just like her Mother and twin Sister.

-Extra-
Crys is using different dates in her book for the different time periods in Equestria.
For example, Crys is maintaining the years in Equestria by both the "Reign" and "Age" method.

(Example)
Reign/Age
Age of Pre-unification: Before the three tribes came together.
Celestia & Luna's Reign (C.L.R.)/Age of Unification: When the three tribes named Celestia and Luna Princesses.
Discord's Reign (D.R.)/Age of Chaos: From around a thousand years ago.
Celestia's Reign (C.R.)/Age of Harmony: After the defeat and imprisonment of Nightmare Moon in the Sibling War.
Two Sisters' Reign (T.S.R.)/Age of Reunification: Change made after Princess Luna came back.

That's just in case Crys' book is referenced in the story.

If there is something wrong just tell me so I can fix it. :pinkiehappy:

eeeh, why note. Quick and easy:

Name: Boli Coca
Age: 20
Species: Pegasus
Cutie Mark: A Keyboard Instrument and yarn mallets
Colorings: Purple Eyes, Black Hair, and Medium Brown Coat
Age: 20
Ht: around 5'7
Wght: 215 lb
Occupation: Part Time Performer with the Canterlot Symphony Orchestra, Also a current Pit (Front Ensemble) Tech for Celestia's School for the Gifted
Education: Canterlot Academy of Music, Bachleor in Percussion Education and Performance
Personality: He's ... REALLY laid back. He's the type of guy who'd PROBABLY show up to a concert in a T-Shirt, Shorts, Socks and flipflops. At the same time though, he's REALLY competitive and Awkward. He's also pretty lewd at times, making jokes bad enough to make rainbow dash blush. For some reason, he always has this air of just being pretty oblivious... but he's not. Usually.
Current home: Ponyville, residential district.
Other: Aside from regular concerts, he's a HUGE enthusiast for Drum Corps and Indoor Percussion, having participated in a couple of World Class groups such as: Canterlot Indoor Percussion Ensemble, and Manehattan Percussion, and Canterlot Drum and Bugle.(Basically the wonderbolts of Marching and such). He is knowledgable about his art, and is happy to answer any questions that are asked of him. He also happens to have a soft spot for Video Games, Childrens card games, and cooking. He sometimes says that if he weren't doing the whole music gig, he'd be a Chef.
Current Accolades include: 1st place in the annual In Percussion International (with MP &CI), also 2nd Place (with CD&B). 2 gold medals, and 1 silver medal.

Name: Aegis Breaker
Age: 22
Species: Unicorn
Cutiemark: A pony emblazed on a broken shield(Signifiers that his special talent is to get past both physical, and magical defences)
Personality: A bit distant, and paronoid, but if he thinks of you as a friend anyone messing with you is dead, their body just doesn't know it yet.
Eyes:Dark blue
Colorings: Red coat with a yellow tail and mane
Ht:5'6
Wght: 106
Scars, allergies or illnesses: Hemophilia, a scar across his back right leg from a corrupted guards spear, weak stamina, and gets a Nose bleeds if using a lot, or powerful magic
Accessories:A dagger(enchanted for extra sharpness), some light enchanted armor(Tougher, filters out gasses, and slows progectales that are above a certain speed [Arrows])
Normal clothes: Black jacket with a dark red shirt and blue jeans. All enchanted to be slightly more durable, and to resist everyday wear and tear.(so they last longer, he doesn't really have a steady job)
Occupation: Treasure Hunter/mercenary
Education: Graduate of CSGU
Minor in defense( gotta know about it to fight against it)
Bachelor in enchantment
and Master in Spell breaking(breaking apart others spells like illusions, curses and shields), and Spell crafting(Making own spells)
Bio: He was born into a small village near the Everfree, and lived there until he was attacked by a timberwolf, and saved by Granite. Him and his parents moved to Canterlot shortly after, though both of them kept in touch. He became a leading pioneer of Spellcraft and was employed as an enchanter for the guard enchanting their armor, before he was attacked by a guard who was under the influence of The nightmare so that the guards would be weakened upon its return. He had a bad reaction to a magical backlash due to an interrupted spell he was working on, causing his problems with high levels of magic, and his poor health. He tried joining the guard to combat such threats, but was denied due to his health problems. Since then he has went through many different jobs, before settling in as a treasure hunter/mercenary. When he was down on his luck do to the low levels of bandits(due to the new lunar guard, and because Discord sacrificed so many) He sought a new job in ponyville and is rooming with his friend until he gets back on his feet.
Skills:Enchantment(Weapons and armor), Shieldbreaking(He has spells that are designed to take down shields, or if not possible bypass them. So no breaking the wedding shield, but he could sneak through it), some hand to hand combat skill (average gaurd level), cooking(he once worked as a chef), and Playing the guitar(Don't ask him to sing though, he has a court order against it.)
Potential*: His potential is somewhere between Twilight and Trixie, though he is incapable of pulling out that amount of power anymore due to his accident, he is still on par with Rarity, when she isn't using her element.
Additional info: While he does have a bit of bitterness towards the guards, he will not let that get between him and equestrian safety, something he values above all else. Was in Canterlot when it was attacked, and recently moved to Ponyville, to meet with Twilight Sparkle, who he has a crush on for being what he wants to be like(powerful, and capable of protecting their friends)

*=Only for Unicorns

3565714 First of all, people automatically hate the red and black combination. And secondly you can't give them a human name like that. Its automatic bad oc man. For gods sake put more thought into it.

3669913 Didn't even think of the red and black thing sorry. Also can I submit more than one character? Like one earth pony, one Pegasus, and my unicorn? Or is just the one enough?l Cause I have an interesting idea for an earth pony. Could probably come up with one for the Pegasus to.

3693597 Yes you can submit more than one.

Name: Granite Enforcer
Age:27
Species: Earth Pony
Cutiemark: A pony holding up a leaning tower
Personality: Nice guy, but a bit perverted, though he does have standards, and will stop pursuing a girl if they get uncomfortable, or if their in a relationship.
Eyes: Dark Grey
Colorings: Beige mane and tail, caot is off color white
Hght:6'10
Wght:367
Scars, Allergies, and Illnesses: Everyday scars, and a long one alongside his torso from a timberwolf.
Accessories: A set of wooden tools :)
Normal Clothes: Blue jeans, and a green shirt.
Occupation: A builder, and a part time boxer.
Education: Graduated High School
Bio:Pretty average life until one day he wandered into the Everfree and saved a younger Aegis from a timberwolf he killed by getting the drop on it. He discoved his talent a couple days latter and went back and turned the Timber wolf into a set of tools.
Skills:Building structures capable of channeling magic very well causing them to accept wards, and be very tough to destroy. This is besides the inite magic within already making them stronger than normal. He is also a boxer.

3575583 Your oc was used in the latest chapter.

3567510 Congratulations your oc is about to be featured in the latest chapter.

4125004 Really? Thank you! :twilightsmile:

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