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KazeRinShin


Truth: The lie we chose to believe. -Someone I donk know and an observasion on human history

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  • 440 weeks
    Best I will do

    Ok so there was a big hiatus with Weaponmaster and I ended up forgetting how the story was supposed to progress so I read trough the story.
    :ajsleepy:I learned just how badly I had written it so I can't really end the story the way I wanted unless I completely re-write it and I am not doing that because I don't really remember exactly what I wanted to say with the story.

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    My List (Chalanged to write it by MrSp33dy123)

    Main 6

    1. Pinkie( :pinkiesad2:coz she's the only one who can read this and I don't want to be cut :pinkiecrazy:)

    2.Pinkameana Dian Pie( Not taking any chances:pinkiehappy:)

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Nov
12th
2015

Best I will do · 12:24am Nov 12th, 2015

Ok so there was a big hiatus with Weaponmaster and I ended up forgetting how the story was supposed to progress so I read trough the story.
:ajsleepy:I learned just how badly I had written it so I can't really end the story the way I wanted unless I completely re-write it and I am not doing that because I don't really remember exactly what I wanted to say with the story.
And I don't really feel like writing a story that has no point to it.:ajsleepy:

Still I know how frustrating it is to read a story just for it to be cancelled so at the very least here are some bullet points on how the story will end if I were to write it now.
(I won't actually write these chapters since I am certain this wasn't the story Weaponmaster was supposed to be.)

1.Luna falls into the everfree and injures herself stranding herself and Josh where they express that they both love each other.

2. Discord interrupts their happy time in the forest to "ask" them for help with the date. Using the fact that he knew all about Luna's plan to reform Celestia to give the ponies more freedom. He also ds that if they help him they will likely have a week or so to do whatever without Celestia judging them and possibly attacking them.

3.After getting some suggestions Discord takes Celestia on a date by ripping a rift in dimensions.(since that is the only way he could prolong the date as long as he wants by pretending he didn't know exactly how to get back to Equestria) leaving a copy of Celestia to take care of Cadence's wedding and raising the sun.

4.Luna and Josh have a bunch of sex before the coming of Cadence. Chrysalis manages to capture Cadence but in the process Blue Blood escapes.

5. Blue Blood warns about the attack but due to his prolonged exposure to magic he isn't too big on details. Shining Armor sets up a barrier preventing the Changeling armies from entering Canterlot (missing Chrysalis who was disguised as Cadence.)

6.Chrysalis learns that Blue Blood wasn't what she thought and decides to use Josh to take over the land.

7.Once the queen manages to get enough control on Shining to make him lower the barrier(during the wedding) she has the changelings feast while a few separate Luna and Josh who were preoccupied with each other and were asleep when the barrier broke.

8.Josh wakes up tied up with Chrysalis standing in front of him. He tries to break free but stops when he learns that Luna will be killed if he continued. She then tries to seduce him saying she can do anything Luna can which fails because Josh states Luna loves him.

9.Chrysalis gets frustrates over the refusal and attempts to use magic on Josh saying things like "She doesn't really love you. What you feel is nothing more then lust." Which drives Josh over the edge and he breaks free killing the queen by breaking her horn and stabbing her with it.(The horn affects him subconsciously and gives him some boost to his magic power.)

10. Josh runs around during the invasion searching for Luna and sees Vibrant Arts die overwhelmed by sheer numbers attempts to save her but fails and she dies. He then realizes that perhaps Chrysalis was actually right and he only fooled himself into thinking he loved Luna when it was more of a mixture of pleasure and the comfort of not having to think of what to do next.

11.Josh's final doubts are broken when he finds Luna mounted by a bunch of changelings and in a fit of rage he kills Luna and the changelings. The bond in term killing him

12.Celestia and Discord finally return and Celestia kills herself over failing to protect her sister again. Discord becomes insane over the loss of his love and is later sealed by the elements. Equestria is left in turmoil and everyone looks to the elements for guidance.

Well I will try to take what I learned from Weaponmaster to my next story and I hope that this post at least gives you a bit of satisfaction if not complete satisfaction with Weaponmaster.

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