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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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    7 comments · 154 views
  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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    1 comments · 95 views
  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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    4 comments · 127 views
  • 2 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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    4 comments · 127 views
  • 3 weeks
    I have reached a decision on Midnight Rising...

    Thanks in part to one final comment that came to me over PM last night. It wasn't a mean comment. In fact, it was nothing but a simple, politely asked question from a reader I hadn't heard from before: do you have to read the griffon chapters to understand what comes after?

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Nov
5th
2015

The Mare behind the Mask · 3:51pm Nov 5th, 2015

Hey folks--if you're missing your Five Stars fix while waiting for the next chapter, you're invited to check out A Gentleman in Training by Denim Blue. It's a very involved story about a group of human friends undergoing Gentleman orientation and boot camp, and builds on a lot of the stuff described in Five Star Service. The latest chapter, titled The Mare Behind The Mask, has a guest appearance by Five Stars herself and it's no cameo--she figures heavily in the chapter.

The story draws on all the lore of Gentlemanverse, from Five Star Service to Feathered Heart and is very well-written, chock full good worldbuilding and character development, and you'll get a hearty helping of clop on the side as well.

Denim Blue has been a good friend and prereader. Give him a read! :heart:

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