Fallout Equestria: Shooting star

well i have started to release my fallout equestria side story "shooting star" so far it's un-edited, not proof read and is submissable to minor or serious change at any time. But still would always love feedback. if you couldn't tell by traditionally having fallout equestria in the title like all other's, it's to honor kkat and her story that started this, i know i was inspired to write a story after reading the original. anyway i'll do a rough edit and will update older chapter's as i go or if there is any major changes so yep.

still looking for a proof reader, editor and someone willing to make the cover art for free (not willing to put money into this yet)

anyway, enjoy