Bad News and Good News · 10:36pm Oct 19th, 2015
The Bad News: I got rejected by EQD
The Good News: As far as I can tell, they didn't have anything wrong with the story itself, just with how I was writing. This is the first time EQD hasn't had a problem with content in my stories, so YAY for that. With some grammatical and pacing fixes, hopefully it'll get up to snuff. Also, I didn't get a strike for my first submission.
https://www.ponychan.net/fan/res/23.html#1170
There's the link in case you want to read through it and give any fixes you can find while I re-work this.
Edit: My plan going forward is to finish up with Chapter 4 (I've already started writing it and I can now take into account what the pre-reader has said), and then I'm gonna take a break from new content while I work on fixing the old chapters. I'll make a post when I've uploaded the fixes so you can go over them.