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PortalJumper


Aspiring author practicing on the world of technicolor horses

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  • 157 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 58 Uploaded!

    And here it is, the end of all things. Sorry for how long this took to write gang, but between the tumultuous opening to the year, a fear of this story's ending falling flat, and the fact that COVID just got done running through my family (everyone's fine, don't worry), it's been a busy few months.

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  • 169 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 57 Uploaded!

    Happy Hearth's Warming! As my gift to you, have 7500 words of Alicornae! Now if you'll excuse, me I'm gonna go eat Chinese food with my family! Don't forget to comment and like if you enjoyed it!

    Finale 2/3

    3 comments · 211 views
  • 171 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 56 Posted!

    Alright boyos, this is a long one and there's a lot of revelations to come, so I hope you understand why this took 15 days to write. Hopefully the next chapter wknd take as long, but it's going to be as long, if not longer than this one, so thanks again for the patience.

    As always, comments are appreciated, and don't forget to like if you enjoyed it!

    Finale: Part 1/3

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  • 172 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 55 Posted!

    And so the end has finally begun. The next chapter and probably the one after that are gonna be my patented "double-length climax chapters", so I thank you in advance for your patience while I work on them. Don't forget to comment and like if you enjoyed, and I'll see ya for the next one!

    1 comments · 178 views
  • 173 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 54 Uploaded!

    It all starts to fall into place in this chapter, so come get it while it's hot! Also, enjoy the extra 1000 or so words since I was getting WAY too into this chapter and let my muse run away with me! Don't forget to comment and like, and enjoy!

    3 comments · 196 views
Oct
19th
2015

Bad News and Good News · 10:36pm Oct 19th, 2015

The Bad News: I got rejected by EQD

The Good News: As far as I can tell, they didn't have anything wrong with the story itself, just with how I was writing. This is the first time EQD hasn't had a problem with content in my stories, so YAY for that. With some grammatical and pacing fixes, hopefully it'll get up to snuff. Also, I didn't get a strike for my first submission.

https://www.ponychan.net/fan/res/23.html#1170

There's the link in case you want to read through it and give any fixes you can find while I re-work this.

Edit: My plan going forward is to finish up with Chapter 4 (I've already started writing it and I can now take into account what the pre-reader has said), and then I'm gonna take a break from new content while I work on fixing the old chapters. I'll make a post when I've uploaded the fixes so you can go over them.

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