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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Today
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Oct
16th
2015

Moving right along... · 3:49pm Oct 16th, 2015

In the space of ten days, I've completed another three-story cycle of Five Star Service, The Lawyer and the Unicorn, and Rise of Firefly. New chapters were written and released for each in that time, and now I'm back at the cycle start again, on Five Star Service. I don't think I need to tell anyone what that's going to be about!

There's also a side project I've been working on occasionally. I made a promise to Raven Regios, owner of the Turnabout Storm novelization, that I would edit one of her earlier stories and basically give it the Turnabout Storm treatment--not just grammar correction but lots of new stuff, large tracts almost completely rewritten. So if you're interested in a modern war/MLP crossover similar to Feathered Heart, check out Call of Duty: Equestrian Warfare.

The chapters you see now are the ones I've already hit; she's unpublished the remainder pending my edits. I'll admit it's been a rather difficult job for me, not being familiar with the Call of Duty world, and I've had to learn about the characters and battles referenced as I go. But I think I've made it work so far. I'm about half-done with it. The hardest part has been writing it in third-person present tense, and I'm sure I've missed some stuff. I'll have to give earlier chapters another pass at some point. Special thanks goes to AJ_Aficionado for helping with the later chapters.

Check out the latest part if you'd like to see my take on a dragon battle with an M1A2 Abrams tank!

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While you're over there checking out Firesight's edited story, check out Raven's Space Dandy story. Ignore the stats on it, trust me, it is hilarious! I had tears running down my face, it's awesome! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I don't even know what Space Dandy is! And it doesn't matter. Trust me, I'm the AJ Aficionado.

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