Hum. · 7:02pm Oct 12th, 2015
I'm not actually pleased with the directionless nature of this story. I feel as if a successor and actual self insert with a more straightforward story would be more well-recieved as well as a little more...
well, more. I have no clue what to do with this Half-Demon Ty. I do have better ideas in the future, but none of them concern this story. There's no end goal. There's no point to the story. It is neither a comedy nor a satire in the classical sense. The only thing the reader has experianced thus far is more akin to a badly-designed rollarcoaster than an actual experiance. There was no method to the madness.
I just want your opinion on this. Do you like this too much for this story to end? Should I proceed forward with a new fic, a new story, a new world, and a new protagonist? I hope that I can do better in the future.
You all deserve at least that.
