Short Bio + Not Sure if Slave or Just Freedom - Feedback? · 12:43pm Oct 12th, 2015
Kinda like to hear what my readers think of A Slave's Freedom so far. If you're wondering if my self-consciousness is appearing, it is not. Just more curious then anything (for those who are wondering what I'm meaning, I tend to get very worried over my writing). This is more of a, "Does this story still attract you despite how long its taking for them to get out of the gorge, or does it seem like it's dragging on?" type deal.
Also, new short bio.
Writing is a slave driver. He always wants me to make more words!
Truth?
-Soaring
In all honesty, I think you're doing perfectly fine with your story. With (almost) all of the stories I have read, I always look forward for an update! Just go with you gut buddy, you story is fine.
-love you
NickyD
On the easy side of life, i'm enjoying seeing that this story is taking it nice and slow. More time spent in the Gorge to develop, and a better person/story will arise from the end of the arc.
On the fast lane of life, we're 32 thousand words in and we're still trapped inside of the Gorge. I mean, this is like Rainbow Dash speeds of unacceptable.
Honestly though, I enjoy the buildup in the Gorge, and i'll probably enjoy the outside even more if we spend eleven chapters within.
tldr; "keep writing more horsewords" -writing
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Too bad they're both injured, otherwise it would've been 20k instead of what will end up being at least 40k words before they're out.
>I love action scenes. :D
There's not that much left on the inside of the Gorge, but man, it's going to get tense.
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Thanks Nicky!
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Tense like a tortoise in... Summer?
>failed joke
i'm going to bed kthxbai
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>When Odd_Shot fails a joke.
...WILL ALWAYS GOAT--I MEAN LOVE HUE--YOU!
Don't die m8.
Yeah, it's taking too long.
The updates are slow and the story is dragging, but other than that, it's great. And, I understand that the story takes time. That's not my issue.
To quote Spooky_Shot,
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By the time you read this, I am already kill.
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Nope. You are not kill.
Odd_Shot only kills, not is kill.
Yunounderstand?
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i am still kill
for i no understand