Oct
11th
2015
New Story - Need an editor or two · 8:11am Oct 11th, 2015
In a fit of inspiration, I have written a 1,500 word story tenatively titled Thanks, Mother which is more or less a reaction fic to the last episode, detailing Diamond Tiara's conversation with her mother, Spoiled Rich, after everything is said and done. I'm looking to get it edited and posted quite quickly, so if anyone is still awake who would be willing to look over a 1,500 word story about Diamond Tiara being Diamond Tiara, I'd appreciate it.
EDIT: I think I've got enough help now. Thanks! The story has been edited and stuck in the queue.
Oh, a fixfic for the episode you hated?
(Sorry I have a couple Captain-Morgan-and-Cokes under my belt right now)
Well let's see whatcha got. I have like 4 consecutive days off so
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3461000
I think it will be more popular than Abandoned Sanctuary. Probably.
3461002 Mmm...it was certainly better, but I don't know about it being 'more popular.'
3474911
Yeahhhhhhh, not so much.
3474914 You had a couple glaring plotholes that killed the story for your primary audience. Do keep in mind that most of the people following you are expecting you to be at least a little bit thorough in your works, and having a plot between DT and her mother come from left field without pulling any actual evidence from the show felt fairly tacked on. It's just kind of there, y'know?
That being said, the characters themselves were enjoyable to read and their devious mannerisms had me chuckling. For that alone, I felt it deserved a thumbs up.