R4 (Reactions, Reviews, Reference, Redirection) #0194 · 6:49pm Oct 10th, 2015
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Here are five slightly edited old reviews:
The Next Edward VIII by Gabriel LaVedier
"Funner" Isn't A Word, Imbecile by TaviTwoHooves
Life in the Inner Wing by Zeck
The Proper Care and Feeding of Monsters by Cold in Gardez
Passing the Time by Rinnaul
The Next Edward VIII by Gabriel LaVedier
[story link] [my original review]
Bleh. The writing is a bit clunky, has too much unsupported worldbuilding, with Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie as marefriends just kinda because. Decent premise though. Twilight giving up being an alicorn so she can stay in Ponyville with her friends and have a simple life. Still, not recommended.
"Funner" Isn't A Word, Imbecile by TaviTwoHooves
[story link] [my original review]
This was funny. I like this Sweetie Belle. A pity she’ll never show up in the show. Highly recommended if you want some intellectual trash-talking Sweetie Belle unleashed on Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
Life in the Inner Wing by Zeck
[story link] [my original review]
Basic slice of life, but with a gryphon instead of a pony for the main character. Some sweet stuff, some fun stuff, some sad stuff, the usual for a good slice of life. Not as much worldbuilding as I would have liked. It’s a story that you would think should have worldbuilding, but ends up not having much. I’d recommend it for light reading.
The Proper Care and Feeding of Monsters by Cold in Gardez
[story link] [my original review]
Another good Cold in Gardez story.The ponies are all written excellently. All of them felt very true to the show. In fact this story would make a good episode. I’d recommend this one.
Passing the Time by Rinnaul
[story link] [my original review]
Nice little story. Twilight and Celestia in a featureless void with each other. A simple character study of both ponies. Nothing deep, but still a good exploration of the characters.
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