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DustyFolio


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  • 514 weeks
    Thank you for the feedback

    I really appreciate the feedback I have received thus far, and have someone willing to do some pre-reading for me, hopefully fixing some of those grammar issues I am prone to. :)

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  • 514 weeks
    Story may be slow.

    This is my first attempt at fanfiction, so any constructive criticism is most welcome, hopefully I can release chapters on a semi regular basis, and most of all, I hope everyone enjoys what they read.

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Thank you for the feedback · 6:53pm Jan 19th, 2012

I really appreciate the feedback I have received thus far, and have someone willing to do some pre-reading for me, hopefully fixing some of those grammar issues I am prone to. :)

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I also want to go back and flesh out the chapters a bit more, I feel like things could use a bit more detail, and then perhaps the pacing will not feel quite as rushed.

Great, looking forward to reading the even better versions in due course!

Hooray! moar!:pinkiehappy:

Thanks to TwilightDerpyMagic for some proofreading and editing, when I finish the story then I plan on going back and fleshing it out.

Heeeey, congrats on the feature!

Gonna have to be sure to drop in a review, heheh.

Keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

5959 Thanks! I have been getting some great reviews, aside from the unintentional Dragonborn feel. :)

All right everypony, I am going to take a day or two and see what I can do to fix the ending, I want to see if I can make it feel a bit less rushed as I am not honestly that happy with it either, if anypony has any creative ideas, feel free to message me and I will take them into consideration. It will help me become a better writer if nothing else.

So there it is, the new ending, eventually I will go back and flesh out the other chapters, there are a few scenes I would like to add, and a few things I would like to expand on. but until then, I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for all the praise and all the criticism. Hopefully the next story I write will be even better.

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