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104 weeks
Darkening Summary

As I promised, here is a brief summary of The Darkening for anyone who would like to continue the story but would rather not spend the time reading the 69k word story again. Now if you haven't read the story, then please don't read this summary, it is going to cover all of the plot points very quickly, and you will get nothing from it but confusion and whiplash. You can catch the summary just
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110 weeks
The Darkening is Back!

I told you it wasn't dead! Yeah, I saw it when those of you placed it in your "dead" and "graveyard" bookshelves, and I gotta say, each one of those hurt my heart a bit, but I get it. I haven't updated the story since April 2019!
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215 weeks
The Darkening isn't Dead, I Swear!

So, I know I haven't really done anything here in nearly two years, but I just wanted to tell anyone who may still care that I haven't given up on The Darkening yet. The truth is, I've been in a bit of a funk since before posting chapter 7. My depression came back, harder than it has in over a decade, and with it came the old feelings of failure. Every time I sat down to write, this little
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316 weeks
The Darkening: Chapter 7

Finally, it's done! This chapter gave me a lot of grief. I wrote the Twilight section over a dozen times easily, and honestly, I nearly gave up at one point. But I didn't, and thanks to a comment from my newer pre-reader, Zodiacspear, it turned out even better than I'd hoped. So look for chapter 7 to be posted next Wednesday around
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329 weeks
The Darkening: Chapter 6

Chapter 6 is ready to go and will be posted next Wednesday. Chapter 7 has really given me a lot of trouble, but I think I've finally just about worked it out, and I'm hoping the next portion of it will come along much quicker. Anyway, I hope you all had a wonderful time over the holidays, and I also hope you'll look forward to chapter 6 after checking out the excerpt after the page break.
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Sep

11th

2015

Chapter Nine is Done! · 4:31pm Sep 11th, 2015

I have just finished writing chapter nine and plan to edit it this weekend. It will be posted Monday at noon EST. This chapter turned out to be nearly 13,000 words long, so I split it up. So while you are looking at a smaller chapter this time (only about 4,000 words), the good news is that I'm nearly done with the next chapter, which I hope to post sometime the following week. From there, I'm hoping to put out the last two chapters relatively quickly, as I have already spent a lot of time planning them. Anyway, I hope that you enjoy the upcoming chapter, and I'll see you all again real soon. Happy reading/writing!