New Chapter Trouble · 10:31pm Sep 8th, 2015
So my ponies, I have the new chapter to A Chance at Self Forgiveness already written. The thing is, I'm not sure if I should release it. The reason are as follow:
One, my editor and actually able to see when he is free to edit the chapter. So if I release it, there will be a noticeable change since I tend to miss some of my grammar mistake. It wont be bad and shouldn't distract those from reading it, but that said, it will still be noticeable, to a degree.
Second, the chapter it self. This chapter is about 95% different then what I had intended it to be. There were so much I wanted to put in and mention, to really have the impact I wanted, but I failed at this. I would rewrite it, but I don't know any other way to tell the chapter. For those of you who don't know, all these chapter has been written solo and the only help is grammar editing. I never truly had writers block, it was always more of writer laziness, no motivation, other stories, games(lots and lots of games).
So here I am stuck, wondering what I should do with this chapter, do I release it and pray to Celestia you ponies like it(without my editor checking the chapter) or do I withhold it until something else can come to mind. The chapter itself is not bad and still get what I want across, it just don't have want I want it to say nor does it have the scene that I want. Since I cant think on how to give it that scene, I'm stuck with these to options.
So, what should I do?
I can have a look through it if you'd like. Feel free to drop me a PM.
I would say put it up. If there would not be any major changes I think you would have nothing to worry about.
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3379816 I suppose so, but I'm have someone read it first before then, you may be able to read it tomorrow. Maybe?