Chapters One and Two · 10:31pm Sep 6th, 2015
Hey, it's me again! So, before I start I wanted to say that I've received some great news; I found someone (rather they found me) to read over the first chapter of my story. After full night of writing, I'm in the process of proofreading and editing my own work. I want this to be something I can be proud of so if anyone else can give me some good tips or if anyone else is interested (or know someone who is) in proofreading over my story please PM. Everyone always says, 'the more the merrier' after all.
Anyway I've finished my first chapter like I stated in my previous blog, this time I was wondering if I should wait actually wait and post my first chapter and second chapter at the same time or if I should combine them? As of right now my first chapter never once mentions Equestria until the end and the chapter is close to 5,000 words. My reason for asking this is because I don't want to deter readers with the first chapter. Considering this is a site dedicated to MLP:FiM fanfiction and my first chapter has nothing to do with equestria, it basically just introduces characters that will be brought up later in the story.
