My First Story!

I know, only one person is actually following me but this is more of a personal blog I suppose just kind of keep me on track and to get some of my thought out of my head and on to "paper" so to speak.
Alright, so for starters the title pretty much say's it, but I'm trying my hand at writing. I have always loved writing and I've always kind of thought up little stories 'here and there', I've never actually given my own imaginings an kind of physical form for other to (hopefully) enjoy. As of yesterday though, I guess something just came over me and I began to write.
I'm currently in the process of editing my first chapter, the problem I'm running into (and always have.. with like everything I do) is that I can be overly critical of my own work.. or so I'm told.. so I was wondering if anyone could make help edit my work or maybe point me in the direction of someone who might like to help proof read some of my material?
Anyway a heads up about the story, it is an HiE fic, many ponies will be featured and the story will follow these categories, adventure, sad, dark, random??, and... romance. Yep, romance, honestly I'm a pretty big romance buff and I love the whole HiE or PoE whichever you prefer, not to say I don't love my fair share of stories that have nothing but pony.. I was also wondering if I should add a cross over tag due to the fact I'm using my character from a game I play..... (drum roll) DayZ!
Okay, okay, I know some people may not know much of this game considering is still in it's alpha stages but I've been playing the MOD from arma to for probably close to 3 or 4 years now, and I've loved the whole survival game play, not trusting anyone type of play style the game has to it. Everyone you meet is usually so "sketchy" as a few of my friends would say. So yeah, if you guys can tell me if I should add a cross over tag that would be awesome. Most of the first chapter will take place in the games universe, afterwards the universe will only be mentioned or remember by the protagonist, soooo... yeah I wasn't sure if it really needed the cross over tag.

Well that's it for now! Hope to hear something soon. Also a few screen shots from me and a few of my friends game play of DayZ





ALL SCREEN SHOT WERE DONE BY A FRIEND AND COMRADE OF MINE ItsNaterHD, check him out on youtube if you want to catch any of our misadventures or just to get some nice gameplay footage.https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClRWBrtyHjv7ZZh9Vos1j6Q