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Writing Competition Results! · 4:59am Sep 1st, 2015

Alrighty, finally found some spare time to read these thangs, so let's get to it! It was fun reading the various types of stories submitted, and as much as I'd like to give everyone first place, we all know that wouldn't work out too well. Besides, I only have one first place prize!

I did not judge the authors based off of their writing skill level, their grammar, or anything technical like that. Instead, I judged each story for what it was and the tale that it told, giving each contestant a fair shot at winning. And also for cuteness. :twilightblush:

I WILL CONTACT THE WINNERS WITHIN 24 HOURS WITH THEIR PRIZES

PRIZES:

FIRST PLACE: GAME MAKING SOFTWARE AND VARIOUS ADD ONS + SOME STEAM GAMES
SECOND PLACE: TWO STEAM GAMES
THIRD PLACE: ONE STEAM GAME

So heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere we go! We'll kick things off with third place first, then second, then finally, the winner!

Experiment 247: Day 1
Subject of study: Why does Rainbow Dash keep crashing into my library?
Hypothesis A: She thinks it’s fun. Disproved because Rainbow prefers staying in the air and hates helping me clean up.
Hypothesis B: She’s clumsy Rainbow is extremely graceful in the air
Hypothesis C: None . . .Further study needed.

Mini Review:
I enjoyed reading this story! It was kinda funny watching Twilight 'stalk' Rainbow through the use of magic, and if I'm not mistaken, the title of the story references Calvin and Hobbes, one of my favorite comics from when I was younger. The one nitpick that I have with it is that it could have easily turned into a shipfic, and TwiDash is awesome. Anyways, like I said, this was a good story. I recommend reading it.


Rarity needs to help Lyra prepare for her first date. Lyra needs to figure out what love is.

Mini Review:
Remember how they say you can't judge a book by its cover? Well, here on fimfiction, you cannot judge a story by its rating and this story is a clear example of that! In this one, Lyra needs help with practicing for a date so she turns to Rarity. I won't ruin the surprise for you, so go check it out! ^^


Twilight asks Rainbow if they can move their reading session from the library over to the cloud house. Snuggling ensues.

Mini Review:
This story was written in a way that piqued my interest. It's kinda hard to describe, and though it breaks up the flow of the story slightly, it wasn't bad that I had to stop reading. It was written well, the ending was pretty darn cute, and I think is deserving of the first place prize.

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Comments ( 15 )

So I didn't win, ah well, at least I got something published in the end XD.

Again, thanks for giving me a fair shot Abyss!:twilightsmile:

When's the next one? I have a one shot that I might enter....

OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!
Thanks SO much! I never expected this! second?
Congratulations Syntavant! You really deserved the win. It was a great story!

I just entered for shits and giggles honestly.

3362006
I liked your story! I don't see a whole lot of good stories that really accentuate Luna's sister aspect. Kinda sad that it didn't win. Good luck next time. If there is one. Good luck with your writing in general!

3362068
Really? I thought Celestia and Luna sister stories were pretty common...oh well! ^_^

And same to you my friend! CONGRATS ON SECOND PLACE!

3362079
Maybe I'm not looking in the right places...:applejackunsure:
Also, thank you!

I won, huh? Awesome.

3362331
Now you can make cool video games!

Comment posted by Syntakitty deleted Jun 15th, 2017

Wohoo, third place. Congratulations to the other winners.

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Hey, you too! Your story was great! I love when Twilight's a little oblivious. It's adorkable!

Anyway you can post a blog about all the ones that didn't make it to the top 3? I wanna read the others and I think it will be good for up and coming writers "and also I think the people who wrote stories for your Competition will be similar to your work and I enjoy yours and things similar." Side note no I didn't write for the contest and wanna be on his blog if you are thinking that :ajbemused:

3363639 I technically could, but that would defeat the purpose of me sharing the top three.

Congrats to all the winners!!!

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