Dotting the Is, crossing the Ts. · 7:13pm Aug 25th, 2015
Hey, so... that story I was working on, the one with Twilight and Rarity and the dual perspectives, the first draft is finished. Would anyone want to do me a huge favour and pre-read it? No hurry -- it's 30,000 words, so it's not really a thing for one sitting. There's sex, but not all of it is sex. It's unsubmitted on my account here, but I could put it on Google Docs if that's how you roll (I'm shit at GDocs, though). Give as much or as little feedback as you like. Don't be afraid to be brutal -- we writers, we take all criticism in the same way whether it's blunt or dressed-up: pretty poorly -- it's not often I have the stamina for long-form pieces, so I'd like to do things right and have this one be good as it can be. Reply if interested, or PM, or carrier pigeon or whatever. Pigeons will probably make it since I like to have the balcony door open.
Wait, you dot the 'i's and cross the 't's? Shoot, I've been doing it wrong for the last 20 years...
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For a second there I thought I derped the title of the blog. Checked it again. Dot i. Cross t. No, it's right. Jesus, I have like a mortal fear of doing dumb shit like that.
yes pls
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PM'd!
Shoot me a PM I'll have a look see if you want
I'm always up for pre-reading things. Can't guarantee a fast pace, but I'll be thorough.
Sure, I haven't preread any horse words in a long time.
My carrier pigeon is on its way with my information. Expect her in a couple days. Her name is Feuerschwinge, and she likes Triscuits. Don't give her any, though. She has indigestion.
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And, covered. I think I'm good now. For now.
...How do you pronounce Feuerschwinge? My German is atrocious for someone who's half German.
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I have no idea. It looks cool as hell written down though.