I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.
And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:
Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.
Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.
After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance
I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m
Thanks in part to one final comment that came to me over PM last night. It wasn't a mean comment. In fact, it was nothing but a simple, politely asked question from a reader I hadn't heard from before: do you have to read the griffon chapters to understand what comes after?
On the occasion of earning my 88th follower, I hereby dub all of you my "Crazy 88". You may expect to receive your black business suits, masks, and cheaply-made katanas shortly...
I do expect them to be returned when I get my 89th follower, however. The "Crazy 89" just doesn't have the same ring to it. And please try repair any sword gashes and get the bloodstains off them before you do. 
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Can I get my blade in belt form? All of this sounds very assassiny so I wanna be able to whip the belt off and go "Woo. Wattah. Waah."
with it.
yay just so you know im not giving them back
3328239 you mean like this girls weapon? (just so you know skip to about 1:00 to see it)
I shall return NOTHING!
3328309 I'll take it, so long as it doesn't come with all the crazy.
Wait....HOW do you not have more followers!?!
3328659 Raven Regios ate them all. It hardly seems fair does it?
But it just sounded cool...