Aug
12th
2015
Write. If you feel sadness, write a poem · 10:55pm Aug 12th, 2015
Is it okay to be terrified?
Is it okay to cry every once in a while?
When the road in front of me seems so dark
When the terror of the past has left it's mark
Deep down I know that I wasn't the one who let you down
The truth from a different stand-point can make you frown
Killing your feelings can make you feel better,
Until your soul dies from being a go-getter
You are the soldier of your own mind
Not that it hurts to be both ambitious and kind...
I like it!
Umm... Terrified doesn't rhyme with While. Otherwise, not bad
3315440 It's not supposed to, so the reader will get confused and then I can steal all their cookies
3315421 Happy to hear!
That's a really beautiful poem.
3316392 Thanks!
Honestly I just randomly made it, this is what happens when I'm left alone with paper and a pen
3316621
It was better than my poem, and I spend days on that, and English isn't my third language.
3316623 But your poem was beautiful!
Seriously, writing is an art and a way of expressing one self, you can't say something is better or worse.
It's simply art