Rewrites on everything

Well, my latest story has been way more successful then I thought, and it is now my most well liked story, having been up on the featured list for the past three days. Which, I have to admit has stroked my ego quite a bit.

With that said, like anything popular, it's also received some criticism. All of which has been constructive,s o i hold no ill will to anyone. But it got me thinking about my other stories, and how they're set up. Specifically, Bite me I took a long look at what I wrote for the first chapters, and I'm not liking what I see. Not so much in the realms of plot, but in the description settings and characters movements and emotions, their clunky. Specifically some of the stylistic choices I made (Octavia's journal, I've done two of those and I forget to do a new one for each chapter). So I'll be going through and rewriting things. I'm not going to make any major changes, but if you feel like going back through to see what I've changed you can. I'm just trying to make this a more satisfying read.

I also plan on rewriting Dawn and Nightfall at some point. It is the second worst story I've put up here, and I know no ones really excited for that, but it's based around a god idea. The execution just sucks, so that's getting a major retool.

And when all is said and done I'll go through Scientific progress to see if some of their criticisms have merit, or do my own stylistic decisions hold true.

Unfortunately, to do this I'll have to take a break from writing the next chapter of Bite me for a while. I'm starting college soon too, so that's probably going to take up my time too. I'll make another blog for when I'm back on track