[NEW THING] Review of a Random Story · 3:11am Aug 9th, 2015
Markiplier's Ponytastic Adventure
What I first thought: Hey, cool a Markiplier in equestria story. Seems legit
What it's about: It's about Markiplier going to equestria and doing stuff. There is only two chapters, so I will update this as it progresses.
Is it good? Yes, nice writing. Kinda needs a bit less use of huge letters but the grammar is solid.
Long review: Okay, this is gonna be longer. Story seems a bit bland, though I'm betting it can only get better. I'm not trying to be rude, but there is no before. You only know that Markiplier is in Equestria. Not what happened to cause him to get there, no flash o' light. Just seems like (For now) that he was pfft there. But the comedy is good, I mean, it's Markiplier what'd you expect. I think the first chapter could you a bit of work but everything else is completely fine. I am looking forwards to more chapters
Rating: 8/10 (Pretty Awesome)
Also what I meant was only the first chapter was bland, and then only part of it was.
Thanks for your opinion! Being as I do little to no editing, I was expecting worse.