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Knight Breeze

Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 13 weeks
    At last, the final chapter is done!

    So, I know it's late, and I'm tired, but I finally finished it; the last chapter of Myrddin. I'm tired, though, and I need to get to bed, so thank you in advance for proofreading it, you don't know how much it helps me out. It probably needs to be broken up into two, and where I need to do that is abundantly obvious when you read it. Just let me know what you think, and I will adjust the

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  • 19 weeks
    Late, tired... but I have a new chapter.

    So, I have a new chapter of The Last Testiment of Myrddin ready, but it needs review. I'm also extremely tired, since the only time I've managed to find to write it was at 3 in the morning while the babies were asleep. That being said, I don't think it's my best work, so if you guys could look at it, I'd appreciate it greatly.

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  • 25 weeks
    Chapter 3 is ready.

    Well, this marks the halfway point. Only two, maybe three more chapters to go before we're finished with The Last Testament of Myrddin. Like I said, it's not long, since it's purpose is to close this plot thread, while introducing information that will be referenced in later installments. However, I hope you guys still find it entertaining, and will still take a look at it, and be my

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  • 33 weeks
    So, working, but something's come up, and I need some advice...

    So, I've been working on the next chapter of A Darkened Sky, and my mind was all like: "I'm not going to let you continue until you tie up that Merlin plot point."

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  • 40 weeks
    Ahem. Not dead. In fact, not dead at all, and I have something to share...

    So, it's late at night, I've been up, unable to sleep, as I watch my two babies try and sleep through the night, and I think: Hey, I have a few hours since, you know, my brain isn't letting me do the whole sleep thing, why not write more of that book that you love so much?

    So I did just that.

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Sneak Peek! · 2:46am Jul 31st, 2015

Well, I pretty much have the next chapter finished. It's still in the rough draft stages, but other than some editing and polishing, it's ready to be published! I have to go to work in a couple of hours, though, so I won't be able to do any of that until tomorrow. For now, however, you guys (if you want) can take a look at it now!

Same rules apply, however, you gotta be my wing-men on this: Next chapter

I hope to be able to publish it sometime tomorrow, or to add something else to it, but for now, I have to get ready for work. Enjoy!

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Comments ( 6 )

I was just thinking about that fic. :pinkiehappy:

Hey, look who's back. We missed you.

Just finished going through it. Another amazing chapter once again, eh? You do that a lot.^^

Well, I am no help. I looks good to me, and the only things I saw were already suggested to correct. :twilightsmile:

Though... I'm really bad at editing, so only the bigger things jump at me. :twilightsheepish:

Meh, just a slight bit more expression seems to be needed near the end, but otherwise, it's good! Bear in mind I am very nitty...er picky... er nitpicky?

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