Sneak Peek!

Well, I pretty much have the next chapter finished. It's still in the rough draft stages, but other than some editing and polishing, it's ready to be published! I have to go to work in a couple of hours, though, so I won't be able to do any of that until tomorrow. For now, however, you guys (if you want) can take a look at it now!

Same rules apply, however, you gotta be my wing-men on this: Next chapter

I hope to be able to publish it sometime tomorrow, or to add something else to it, but for now, I have to get ready for work. Enjoy!

Comments

[Krazyfan1]

[More Dakka]

I was just thinking about that fic.

[shirotora]

Hey, look who's back. We missed you.

[Regreme]

Just finished going through it. Another amazing chapter once again, eh? You do that a lot.^^

[Topaz Moon]

Well, I am no help. I looks good to me, and the only things I saw were already suggested to correct.

Though... I'm really bad at editing, so only the bigger things jump at me.

[Keradon]

Meh, just a slight bit more expression seems to be needed near the end, but otherwise, it's good! Bear in mind I am very nitty...er picky... er nitpicky?