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I have never taken a shit in my life because it all flies out my mouth. (THIS ACCOUNT IS INACTIVE)

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  • 406 weeks
    Checking In

    Just checking in. I'm still rewriting Prologue. That's why it's currently unpublished, if you were wondering.

    Adios!

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  • 409 weeks
    Rewrite #2: Electric Boogaloo

    Oh boy, Summer! Now WTR can be de-cringed.

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  • 438 weeks
    Death Evades Me Yet

    Don't worry, I'm still alive. It's been a weird semester so far, but things are at the halfway point and the cold weather is kicking in. I should have more time to work on Wandering Through Realities, and other goodies for my valued following!

    It's definitely been a while... :rainbowderp:

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  • 448 weeks
    Work & School Schedule; Prologue, Chapters I & II REVAMP

    From tomorrow to the 23rd, I will be working non-stop from dawn till dusk. Starting the 24th, I will be in school again (Mon-Fri) while working the weekends.

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  • 449 weeks
    Rating De-Elevated & Updates

    The rating for Wandering Through Realities has been de-elevated from Mature to Teen. Brief gore and strong language are only contained to Chapter III, so to have the whole story rated M just for that is a bit overboard.

    Rating subject to change as the story progresses.

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Jul
17th
2015

Prologue: "Truth or Tale" and Chapter I: "Enter the Infinite" (Revisions Finished) · 3:51am Jul 17th, 2015

Revisions for Wandering Through Realities, Prologue: "Truth or Tale" and Chapter I: "Enter the Infinite" has been completed.

REVISIONS INCLUDE:
(1) Adrolon has been given more thought process as well as speech in Chapter I, deepening his character.
(a) STORY SPOILER: Adrolon is inexperienced and free-thinking, but is extremely intelligent.
(2) Major paragraph structure changes in Prologue and Chapter I.
(a) Proper indentation as well as paragraph breakage.
(b) Paragraphs have been formatted to be shorter for the sake of not dragging on.
(3) Major sentence structure changes in Chapter I.
(a) More fluidity and less chippy-choppy.
(b) Increased vividness and powerful language put in place of generic wordage.
(4) Minor descriptive changes in Chapter I.
(a) Lack of imagery has been beefed up.
(b) Increased vividness and powerful language put in place of generic wordage.

Well damn, this sounds like an iOS update description. Rereading the revised chapters is not necessary, as the story has not changed. However, I invite you to reread them if you wish to see the improvements enacted.

Chapter II: "Chaos Orb" will be revised in the next day or so, and Chapter III: "The Aeons Torn" will be published shortly after.

Note: Revisions were made in accordance to Ezn's kickass writing guide.

You just sit there and look pretty babydoll,
Zolvy-poo.

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