Black Angel revisions & new chapter · 12:17am Jul 16th, 2015
After spending weeks in the doldrums, I finally got in gear again with my writing. It took a desperate measure, the only thing that has worked for me: I shut off my internet and my gaming computer.
It's hot summer now, too hot here in Texas to do too much outdoors if I can avoid it. So, I'm gonna stay under the A/C, keep the gaming rig turned off, and try to get more writing done. Maybe I can finally wrap up Black Angel.
In addition to posting the newest chapter today, I went back and made some other revisions to the story. I changed the troggle language to something I think is funnier. I changed Annaland to Frivoli and expanded Nightmare Moon's experience there slightly. I polished a few other minor things. It's nothing that changes the trajectory of the story, and nothing that requires anyone to go back and re-read chapters. I hope new readers will find it a bit more engaging.
It feels good to finally get some writing done after so long, doesn't it?
Man, I still have to check out that new one you posted some days ago. It's been sitting open in a tab ever since. Bleh, so far behind in all the reading I want to do.