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LightningSword


Me. Take it or leave it.

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Jul
15th
2015

If it's any consolation . . . · 5:28am Jul 15th, 2015

. . . I've made a few slight changes to "New Neighbor". Check it out, if you like. I hope it makes more sense, now.

Comments ( 6 )

Dude don't change yourself for a hate critic, literature is an art and should be appreciated as such, don't look back on your previous stories in guilt and shame. You gotta look at them for what they are, actual works of art, never shoot your work down like that man.

Interesting changes, and while I do celebrate them, you had not need change them for that senseless critic. You have talent, never doubt that or yourself.

Could I get an overview of what the changes were? I'd like to know if there's enough of a change to be worth rereading it or not.

3240580 It's not much, really. I gave it a new opening line, explained why the main character's move is annoying and why unpacking the last box will be more enjoyable, and I made the car seem louder when it starts and surprises Rarity.

In other words, all the things pointed out in the story's Rage Review that I could change without messing up the story. You can reread it if you want to, but it's not really all that different. I just made the changes to give myself some peace of mind . . .

3240670 Ah, next time you should instead remember what that fake priest Kotomine Kirei once said:

"It is the path you have chosen. Take pride in it."

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