Jul
13th
2015
A drive to read · 3:48pm Jul 13th, 2015
Hello everyone. As I'm sure you are all waiting for Refined Starlight to be started, I decided that while you wait you can read the original story Starlight in a Broken Vessel through my Google drive. Every chapter is there in full and completed from chapter 1 to 215 (the most recent chapter 216 is available but left unfinished) so enjoy, just remember that the entire thing is being retconned. Also, there are a few errors there as these are the chapters, but not all of them are fully fixed since they weren't intended for public viewing.
Enjoy the story HERE.
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the-pieman · 417 views
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I can't help but ask. How will the people who follow the story but not your account know about what happened / is happening?
I'm new hear in that I haven't heard of the story before I stumbled across more then one blog post asking about where it went. Now I'm kind of curious so I'll follow you and wait for the rewrite.
3298330 Yeah, it is a bit confusing, but I've got that covered. What I'll do is explain in-story how the "re-write" is occurring, but it doesn't require someone to have read the original.
I admit that 216 chapters and over a year of work seems like a lot to just erase and start over but... I have to face it that the first thirty chapters were absolute garbage. You guys, new and returning readers, deserve better.
i don't know if i'm stupid or something (probably am) but when i click chapters 1 through 20 something it goes from 21 and up D:
3474779 That's because those chapters have already been rewritten and are now a part of Refined Starlight. It's because I don't want new readers checking it out and getting confused by reading parts that have been retconned already. As Refined Starlight is written, the original gets overwritten. I know it's confusing but trust me, that stuff was not well-written, which is why there's a rewrite in the first place.
3477250 i still kind of wanted to read the old version T_T
Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in Refined Starlight in a Broken Vessel? Will she be reaching Unstoppable Rage levels of anger? Will she be giving out any No Holds Barred Beatdowns?
3503797 Only if she has a good reason to, why?