Sequel

Just as the title says, I wrote a sequel for A Chance.
This story will be short, an idea I had stuck in my head for some time, and after this one I'm planing on writing another one.
Right now I'm waiting to get an answer from someone interested in editing the story. If I don't get an answer for Monday, then I will just upload it, with some look, there won't be too many mistakes.

Comments

[Krickis]

I was literally just thinking about A Chance, and planning on reading another of your stories at work tonight

If you don't hear back from the other editor I might be able to help if you wanted, depending on whether you were looking for some one to help with grammer or content. In any event I'm looking forward to it

[elmago02]

3230053 Hey, good to hear that you were thinking about my stories, and I hope you find the others just as good or better than A Chance.
Now, Could I ask you for a little favor? I would like to hear your opinion on this new story, I would PM you the link to the doc. I normally ask a friend for his opinion but I haven't been able to contact him.

[Krickis]

3230091
Yeah, I'm totally down for that. I'm on my way to work now, I can read it on my lunch break and let you know my thoughts when I get off in the morning.

Heads up, my grammar is passable, but certainly not my strong suit. I'm better at pretending for content. If you wanted someone more for grammar I could ask my editor if she'd be interested.

[elmago02]

3230141 I'm more interested in the content part, but will keep that in mind. 2 people offered to help and i send them PM like 12 hours ago but never got an answer.
doc, it's only the first chapter and it's a bit short, but this will be just a short story before the one I really want to write.

[Random Order]

I am intrigued.