Teeny Tiny Itsy Bitsy Change · 6:08pm Jul 9th, 2015
Once again, I modified a couple of words in the last line of The Clarity of Darkness. The difficulty I've had has been riding the fine line between a tragic misinterpretation that I didn't think anypony would make, and total saccharine glurge. I think the change I've made is (finally) an effective compromise.
Unrelated: new story coming in just a day or two!