Tomorrow: July 6th, 2015. · 1:00am Jul 6th, 2015
The first chapter is almost finished, will be done by tonight. Escape From This Afterlife (Revised) will be submitted tomorrow, July 6th. I know I took a long time to revise, but trust me, it's worth it.
Expect gore, and a younger Crimson. He's twenty three, while the ponies are around twenty five/six. And, there will be more of an adventure element. In the previous version, we kind of just sat around in Ponyville and felt as though the plot wasn't progressing.
New cover art I edited myself, new description, new everything. As far as I'm concerned, the only things that were kept was Crimson's name and the title itself. No more cringe. (Well, I though it was cringey, so I'm going to try and keep the edge and cringe to a bare minimal).
And another thing, there will be sex. The original, I had no plans for clop in it, but fuck it, why not? It's nothing I haven't seen or read before, so who cares. Of course, there will be an author's note before a chapter begins stating that there will be either sex or gore.
Anyways, sees yous.