Revising

Hello my little ponies! To those that have read the first two chapters of 'Am I Real?' first off, thank you for all the comments and critics. Second, I just wanted to let you know that know that the awesome editor First Spark is looking over them and fixing problems and adding in her two cents with the story and I will be posting the revised versions when they are done. The first two chapters will say when they are revised so you don't have to keep rereading them over and over to check. That will be the last I'm doing of that since the following chapters will be edited before they are posted. Thank you, and also, they will be longer after this chapter. Thank you and have an AWESOME DAY!