Rest of Chapter 1 comments and Chapter 2 related stuff as well...

So I wonder whether anyone out there is actually reading these blog posts I write. It would be nice if I got a comment every once in a while just to know that I'm not just talking to myself in this blogs, and that there are actual readers that for some reason actually care about what I do/say/think. :P

So first of all, I never expected so many people to actually read and take an interest in my first story! Makes me really happy knowing that what I write isn't completely useless after all! xD So again, thanks to all the people who read my fic, and especially to all *counts the names* 16 of you that are tracking my fic! It's great to know there are people keen on reading more of the chapters I will be posting up!

Anyway, onto me responding to more comments:

RainbowCrash

Thanks for tracking my fic, I hope that what I have next to post up will be up to your satisfaction. With the characterisation of my OC I plan on going into a heck of a lot of character development with him in later chapters. So that is something I have already focused on, but again thank you for pointing it out! :D As for Fluttershy, well that's a funny story actually. You see when I wrote the first chapter up on FF.net, one of the first comments I actually got was and I quote:

"I get that you're trying to make Fluttershy seem shy, but firstly, they've been talking for three hours by the end, I figure she would've either gotten used to the guy of found a way to bugger off by that time, and secondly, it comes across almost like she's got a stutter, or frostbite, I'd say you've overdone the stuttering a fair bit."

So when I uploaded it onto here, I decided to cut out a fair bit of the stuttering, to make it better. However, I may have cut out a bit too much, so for that I apologise. I will definitely try to work on her character a bit more on Chapter 7...that is of course if you've even read my first blog post, as well as this one!

Ninjastar91774

Okay, seeing as you've commented three times, I will respond to all three at once.

Ist Comment:
No rape. Check.
No violence...actually, there is one scene in chapter 6 which does have a bit of violence in it. But, that's the only one. I promise! *halo pops above me head*

2nd Comment:
Does my story need to be logical...? I'm just kidding all will be explained in Chapter 3 don't you worry!

3rd Comment:
Um...I don't quite understand what you meant...are you referring to the fact that my fic has a love triangle, or are you asking for me to make another love triangle? A little clarification would be nice! Thanks! ^_^

derpy von muffins

Your comment literally made me laugh out loud. Honestly, the stares I got on the train this morning when I read your comment. *dirty looks followed by awkward silence*

Morfonious

Moar you shall get! *laughs maniacally as he gets to work on Chapter 3*

Well that's it for the moment. I should get Chapter 3 ready for you guys in the next couple of hours! So I hope you'll enjoy that!

Again I thank you for all the great support you've shown me! Plus, if you do read this, again thanks for taking the time to read this! Please do leave a comment on this just so that I know you've read it! xD

Yours Truly,
BlackSpire