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Jesus. Fucking. Christ. In. A. Basket.

The revised story is going to be so different from the original. The literal revised first chapter is so fucking brutal and gory, and Crimson's crimes aren't going to be when he's in the army. Anyway, here's a list of what I will be adding, changing, and removing:

• Description is changed
• Tags are changed
• New Cover Art
• Crimson's real name has been changed and isn't going to be revealed for awhile this time
• Crimson's age has been changed from 29 to 33
• Crimson's personality has been altered
• Crimson's back story has been changed
• George and the secret mafia that Crimson was forced into was removed completely from the story
• Crimson was never in the army, instead working as a sheriff in the county police in Atlanta (Harty Har Har, enter your The Walking Dead jokes here)
• Crimson's appearance has been altered
• Crimson is married
• Crimson's parents are both alive and well (Well... Not for more than a few thousands words, anyway...)
• Pinkie is actually in the first chapter this time, finally
• Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Twilight Sparkle, and Spike are shown more
• Removed the two mares that were mauled in the Everfree Forest
• Crimson is not the captain of Twilight's guard
• Crimson's powers have been altered and are now less OP (Because being able to spawn anything and being half invincible is really OP)
• Crimson is more bitter, cynical, and less outgoing (Oh, the joys)
• Celestia, Luna, and Cadence's personalities are now better accommodated to canon
• Twilight's guard is already established when Crimson arrives
• Crimson's way of Death is changed
• Crimson's way of coming up with the fake name of Crimson is changes to be less stupid
• More gore, and more... Uh... SEX!
• The Guardians of Balance are removed
• The Demons that attack Crimson and mutilate his eye are removed, leaving Crimson's eye fully intact
• The year is changed from 2008 to 2015
• There is now more Afterlife stuff, instead of it being like any old generic HIE story
• Crimson is now actually trying to Escape from the Afterlife, instead of being like "I'll just do it later"
• Altered the scene between Crimson and Celestia where she questions him (Yes, that is being kept in, but it will only be a scene, not a whole chapter)
• More interaction between Crimson and other ponies around Ponyville, and other places
• The dragon scene is removed
• Applejack being a lie-detector is removed
• Chapter names changed
• The old chapters were deleted and I'll be starting from scratch for chapter 1-8
• Removed Crossover tag
• Crimson is less emotional and more cold
• Crimson is meant to be despised and hated for the whole first chapter, if not, I failed at that evil shit
• There will now be warnings in the chapter name about sexual or gory content, as well a warning before the actual content in the chapter itself
• The fight scene between Crimson and the Changelings is removed
• Crimson's point of being in Equestria is changed (It was later revealed in a later chapter, but I still change it because it was fucking stupid)
• Act sizes changed from 16 chapters to 12, including an interlude
• Save Me is now connected to Escape From This Afterlife, and is a part of the Apocalypse series (Or universe, if you don't want to call it Series)
• Will be resubmitted by the end of the month