Editing a new story: Snails 1/2, by Kitsy-chan · 2:16am Jun 5th, 2015
For anyone interested, I'm now editing a new story by Kitsy-chan called Snails 1/2.
Without spoiling too much, it's a story about Snails and a magic pool haunted by the spirit of a drowned filly. After falling in the pool, he is now cursed: when touched with cold water, he will turn into a filly, and when touched with hot water, back into a colt.
And, of course, he immediately gets in way too deep. It makes for some light, funny reading, so it's worth checking out if you have the time.
A comedy loosely based on Ranma 1/2.
Kitsy writes about as quickly as I can edit, and she's already several chapters ahead, so that means new chapters will probably come as fast as I edit them, which should be 1-2 a day now that I'm on summer vacation.
And don't worry, her writing is better than mine ;)
Good. Now if you stop missing every case when poor Snails' name is brutally decapitalized, it'll be perfect.
Seriously, look out for names, Kitsy hates them for some reason.
Have to say, it's pretty funny so far.
The fact that Snails' voice actor, Ian Richard Cox, voiced Male Ranma and Inuyasha. I assume the filly's voice actress would be the same for girl-type Ranma. What are you going to use for Snails' female form?
Nice touch with the deer as the Junsenkyo guide who warns people about the cursed pools.
Yeah, I already have 9 chapters of it done so far :)
3124615 I'll go over with a third set of edits to get everything I missed the first 2 times, but first I want to focus on editing all of the existing chapters.
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By that time it'll all be posted already.
3125051 the story has to end eventually, right?
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It's Ranma 1/2 story. Even if it ends, it bound to have sequels.
3125130 but I'm supposed to have a life!
3126181 Too late.