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  • 162 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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    2 comments · 1,183 views
  • 190 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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    1 comments · 741 views
  • 191 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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    4 comments · 453 views
  • 191 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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    6 comments · 336 views
  • 195 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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May
23rd
2015

Title Change + voting · 1:11am May 23rd, 2015

Greetings my faithful readers.

I would just like to inform you that I changed the title of this story from "Ponyville's Tiny Librarian" to "Nightmare Moon's Tiny Adversary"

The reason behind it is simple: I plan to name the sequel "Ponyville's Tiny Librarian" so I needed to change the title.

If you are unhappy with this new title or if you have a better idea, feel free to post comment. If someone will post comment with title idea you like or dislike, feel free to upvote his idea, I am always open for suggestions.


On a side note, my top editor sadly was unable to edit my story at all. It has been month since he logged on the document. I am still hoping that his schedule will improve, but at this rate, updating this story will take a very long time. Currently, there are still chapter 6 part 2, 3 and epilogue missing.
Long story short, this story isn't dead, but is very slowly updated. My appologise for the delay.

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Comments ( 19 )

If you like the new title "Nightmare Moon's Tiny Adversary" which was suggested by Aduck, upvote this comment. If you dislike it, downvote this comment.

Eh. It is better than Ponyville's Tiny Librarian, considering that so far, Twilight has neither moved into Ponyville nor become a librarian, and we're near the end of the story.

Hmm...
I do like the (character) tiny (relationship) construction, but Nightmare moon's tiny adversary is a mouthful.

Harmony's tiny avatar, maybe?
Luna's tiny savior?

Since the story is all about Twilight's struggle against Nightmare Moon, I like this title more!

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That's two ideas so far. I will need more before I can make another blog where I will ask people to vote on alternative titles.

"Nightmare Moon's Tiny Adversary" is definitely more fitting.

I was all set to break out my torches and pitchforks for changing the title of your story so late in the game, but then I read your reasoning before it and I was k.

Cool story bro, tell it 'again'. The only other title change I can think of fitting this story would be something along the lines of the Element of Magic turning into bitchin' armor, but that might be too many spoilers.

All in all, I agree with your change.

I think the new title fits better. Ponyville's tiny librarian sounds more like a SOL title.

Yeah when I first noticed I kind of figured that was your reasoning for changing the title.

RC

Twilight, the smallest hero of equestria.

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This seems more of a praise rather than actual story title, and I don't exacly see how it is related to her arriving in Ponyville and encountering Nightmare Moon.

RC

3148169 :facehoof: it was a praise. I couldent think of a tittle so I said this.

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I know, it is just that you choise an odd place to add praise. I assumed you tried to come up with a title, lol.

RC

3149285 i had tried. Failed. Came up with a praise.

and is it weird that I came up with around 12 new short fanficts for a book I was reading? Without being able to wright them?

The smaller things in life?
Ponyville of the Tiny?
Tiny Twilight's Topical Treehouse of Books?

I'm not against the title change, actually. That said, I haven't actually been following the sequel. Didn't interest me the way CTS did. My opinion may be invalid.

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And why it didn't interest you, any specific reasons? Or you just prefer slice of life to adventure type of stories?

3251916 Kinda. Adventure done especially well is interesting (Immortal Game, the Monster Below), but if it isn't amazing I tend to get bored very quickly.
Actually, I remember one specific scene where Twilight was lecturing Rarity about not being mean, and pretty much every other member of the mane 6, I think. And it felt like an author tract, an excuse for you to rant through Twilight about every main character.
It was long enough ago (ago enough?) that hindsight probably makes it seem worse than it is. Maybe I was just imagining it, or you weren't actually ranting and it was a genuine character moment or something.
Hell, maybe I'm thinking about the wrong story.
That's just the scene that I remember the most.

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Actually, I remember one specific scene where Twilight was lecturing Rarity about not being mean, and pretty much every other member of the mane 6, I think. And it felt like an author tract, an excuse for you to rant through Twilight about every main character

She rant only to Rarity, and she did it because of her bad experience with nobility, advice from Prince Blueblood, and she was getting a bit frustrated after her long day, No offense, but I think Twilight's outburst was had it's grounds and was not thrown out of nowhere.

As for her ranting at other members, you are making it up, I would suggest you to read this story again, or start from where you left off, because you are honestly making it worse than it actually is.

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