Join Woona's Army of the Night! (a.k.a. pre-readers please???) · 3:10pm May 12th, 2015
I've got a couple of stories coming up that I'd love a few pre-readers for. They're both crossovers, so familiarity with the source material would be an advantage.
» H₂Orse: Just Add Water — crossover with an Australian show about mermaids. E-rated. This story is a one-shot random comedy, under 4000 words. I mostly want pre-readers to point out any obvious spelling/grammar mistakes, but also to tell me whether they think it's funny enough to be called comedy.
» The Ballad of Falabella Mulan — crossover with Disney's Mulan. T-rated for violence in future chapters. This story is a chapter-based adventure with a little bit of comedy. So far the prologue and the next 1½ chapters have been written. I'd like pre-readers to give me feedback on characterization, dialogue, world building, all those kinds of things. Oh, and any obvious spelling/grammar mistakes. I'd ideally like pre-readers who are willing to stick with the story and give feedback on future chapters once I've written them.
Either comment below or PM me if interested. I only really want 2 or 3 people per story.
I'm familiar with both, so I can help you if you want!
3064332 Thanks!
Sure. I'll proofread. I need something to get me back into the groove of writing.
3065571 Thanks, I shall PM you.