Possible Revision for Hunted

Lately, I've been thinking I could have done better with Hunted, especially the first two chapters. So I might just rewrite the story. Same ending of course, but maybe add a few more different events or confrontations, particularly in the chase chapter. But I want to know what ya'll think of the idea before I decide on whether or not to do it. Should I rewrite the story or leave it as it is?

Comments

[Alticron]

I'd probably leave it as is.

[unknowngamer]

go for it

[jkreader]

Do it.

[Omnishifter]

As long as you don't take out any of the good bits, like Sonata giving a wave for example, I say go for it.

[Harms Way]

3058029 If anything, I'm gonna be adding more details and events, not taking stuff out