Continuation of "Widening the Lens" by Harry Leferts and Co.

Hello everyone!
I want to announce that I am currently writing a continuation of "Widening the Lens" by Harry Leferts and friends.
I need someone to preread it. But I want everyone to be able to give me feedback, so I made it available online.
What do you think of it? Write a comment below or send me a PM with your thoughts!

Ink_25

Edit [25 May 2016]: paused working on it until further notice.

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[Ink_25]

Over a year after I wrote this, I don't think I'll ever be publishing it... I lost all the motivation to move further on with it. I might do so in the future, though.