R4 (Reactions, Reviews, Reference, Redirection) #0146 · 1:55am May 5th, 2015
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Here are five slightly edited old reviews:
Parhelion by Habanc
A Voice In The Dark by Blueshift
What Could Have Been Lost by TheVClaw
Twilight Sparkle Tries Napping in a Tree by Lightning Bearer
Lyra Visits Bon Bon in Jail by Super Trampoline
Parhelion by Habanc
[story link] [my original review]
This was fun. Could have been a bit shorter, but it was cute. Did like this version of Princess Luna. Plus it ends with Princess Twilight Sparkle punching Princess Luna in the face. An honor once reserved only for Flash Sentry. Silly fluffy fanfic, but good for what it is.
A Voice In The Dark by Blueshift
[story link] [my original review]
Really good. Pretty powerful look at what the pony tribes might have been like before the unification. With a bit of prelude for that same event later in the timeline. Not as good as A Cup Of Joe, but i’d put it in the same ballpark.
What Could Have Been Lost by TheVClaw
[story link] [my original review]
Somewhat touching story. Has a fairly dark alternate ending for the wedding episodes, though just as a dream. Nice family moment between Twilight Sparkle and Spike.
Twilight Sparkle Tries Napping in a Tree by Lightning Bearer
[story link] [my original review]
Not bad. Start is fun. Pretty much a simple ‘Twilight Sparkle is excessively Twilight at a simple problem’ that is done decently well. Ending was predictable and kind of fizzles out.
Lyra Visits Bon Bon in Jail by Super Trampoline
[story link] [my original review]
This was okay. It certainly isn’t the best ‘Bon Bon is a changeling’ story I’ve read. Which is, I believe, a sub-genre of four stories I’ve read so far? Still really enjoy the all-dialogue stories though.
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