1. Show vs Tell is not as simple as it seems. 2. As a writer and editor, there is nothing worse than being cooked alive in one's own perspective. 3. I am an amateur. But, I believe I'm getting better.
TWO-PART BLOG POST. LET'S SEE IF ANYONE CAN UNDERSTAND THE SECOND PART.
I. He was getting old.
It was his time, but my gosh it was not a peaceful death. He suffered from age-related malfunctions of his body, and had to go through a painful time before he went.
Been busy here in Davao, with repairs repairs repairs. Roof repairs of the boarding house, that is. Next would be a window repair (mom's room) and construction of cabinets for the other boarding house in the same property and the other one.
Now, a little something-conversation between me and my editor: