I am blown away

Wow, simply wow. I can't believe how much love I got for just that simple story. I'll be honest that I was nervous putting anything out into the public like that, but now I feel so thankful! I do understand it is rather rough and this is my first time to ever put my thought out into a public forum so I apologize for the errors laced throughout. As always I plan to hone my craft and make it better and better; with how nervous I am about this kind of thing I go over things over and over until I'm satisfied. Again thank you so much everyone and trust me in saying that I plan to continue to put up further stories. As I've mentioned before expect a lot of one shots and small pieces, but should I ever get the gumption I will expound and try my hand at longer pieces.