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  • 594 weeks
    Back in the Saddle

    Hello, those of you who still bother to listen. After many long months of scrupulous and thorough review, I have finally finished with a prologue I can be proud of. Now that I have the beginning, I can start on the middle, and eventually, the end. Thank you all for continuing on with me, especially after all the complications procrastinating. Hopefully you plan to stick around a bit longer

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  • 622 weeks
    Ouch... My self esteem

    Here's the review I got back from PonyChan's Training Grounds.

    Yeah, this isn't much of a bite to back up the bark. Let's just go with I was fairly lenient about the whole thing.

    Just at first sight, your chapters are extremely short, which means you are probably pacing them too fast and just telling a lot. Either that or cutting them off before they should be. But we'll see.

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  • 625 weeks
    It's away!

    Keep your hooves crossed...

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  • 626 weeks
    Editing Checklist


    Well... It's taken a bit longer than a week, but I am finally drawing near the end of my massive editing spree of Into Darkness (You might as well call it a rewrite)

    Thanks to some help from benxlabs, (Who, might I add, has been a real lifesaver these past weeks) I've been able to bring you the 'remastered' edition of Into Darkness. I've taken the liberty of including a change-log below:

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  • 630 weeks
    EQD-Bound

    That's right; your favorite writer is going for the big leagues. I will soon be submitting my story, Into Darkness, to the mercurial proof-readers of Equestria Daily. In preparation for this momentous occasion, I will be going back over each chapter to zap from existence EVERY SINGLE INDIVIDUAL ERROR from the story that I missed due to a lack of proofreaders (my bad). Expect relatively small

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Jan
11th
2012

Back in the Saddle · 4:59am Jan 11th, 2012

Contrary to my last post, I have finally gotten back into the swing of writing, and have nearly finished the next chapter of Into Darkness. Now for a status update of all stories so far.

Eclipse - On hiatus do to me not having a clue what to write and possibly just tossing the entire chapter I have begun. Sorry guys, I was really looking forward to continuing this one, but every time I stare at the words I have assembled (around 3000 last time I checked) nothing seems to pop up in my head. If you want to read what I have so far, message me and I will send you the rough draft though be aware it has MANY grammatical, sentence, and order issues.

Into Darkness - Coming along just fine. Hope to have the next chapter up by either the end of this week or the beginning of next, might also go back and clean up the story thus far. I recommend Eclipse readers check out this story to pass the time while I attempt to throw together a decent chapter for the story you've all been incredibly patient for.

Limitless - Errr... Not so sure about this one. I pretty much have chapter 2 written up, but I just don't like the way it sounds at the moment. Might get it up in the next few weeks but I wouldn't count on it, as I will be devoting most if not all of my attention to getting through Into Darkness. Check out Eclipse, or Into Darkness if you're feeling impatient or other wise.

Thats about all I have for you guys at the moment. Thanks for taking time to read this, and hope you had a good holiday!

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