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ShootingStar213


Hello everyone, as a artist, I love to create new things, stories are no exception. So I shall post a series I thought of known as My Little Pony Civil war. Enjoy.

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    The cutiemark Crusaders Mark

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2015

What can I do to make my stories better? · 3:33pm Mar 20th, 2015

When you try and try and try and no matter how hard you try you can't make a decent story what do you do? Well I have hit this roadblock for quite awhile now. I have made what I think is a pretty interesting series known as MLP Civil war, but out of the two chapters I have made I got 9 dislikes so far. The reason I am upset is because I have only 2 likes. No one comments stating why it's bad they just give me a thumbs down and expect me to understand what I did wrong. Is it the grammar? Probably, I suck at spelling and grammar, makes for a bad author I know but I am still trying. Is it the fact that people don't like seeing characters they like shown in a different light? In my case I had to have a traumatic change in order to show why they are fighting, guess I am doing a bad job at it. Or is it something else? I tend to draw allot more then I write but I am trying to write something good for practice mainly. Sure my crappy art is crap but some people like it. Matter of fact they do the same thing with my art, no comments or anything. I don't know what to do then. Should I just give up? Well if I do then the trolls win. Speaking of Trolls, it's always easy to pick on someone behind a screen, it shows how much of a coward you truly are. If you have a reason more so then just saying this sucks period then I can respect you, because your not trolling, your criticizing. I have dealt with allot of trolls, I can bet allot of people online do too. In fact if your a brony then you have been trolled in one way or another.

I can take a joke, I joke around myself, most jokes are lies so you can get a laugh, I believe that. Anyways back on topic, what can I do to make a better reading experience for the people who read my series? I tried hard writing this story, I tried my hardest to draw it, and no matter what I do I can't seem to make something people like. Of course I might just be beating myself up worse then everyone else, there is probably a simple explanation for this. Maybe I am just over reacting, but I look at others stories, the're are good stories and a few bad ones, but I don't just thumb down the bad ones, unless it is nothing but kill kill die die with no real reason. In fact I think the main reason I have so many thumbs down is because I am showing Luna as a true villein and not the hero everyone likes. Nightmare moon was evil people, get over it.

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