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Yonah21


I write POE's, and HIE's mostly. I hope you all enjoy my work.

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  • 446 weeks
    Story

    So sorry for the delays. I keep getting distracted by my novel which is almost at the 8th chapter. I'm not abandoning my fanfic, I just am having trouble still. Just letting you know.

    6 comments · 569 views
  • 452 weeks
    To Return Home :)

    Letting you know I am making major progress with the story. I am about halfway done or so with the newest chapter :twilightsmile:

    3 comments · 324 views
  • 452 weeks
    Ten Little Critters

    Ten little critters, all gathered and looking fine.
    One choked on pride, and then, there was nine.

    Nine little critters, practically served on a plate.
    One spoke poorly, and then there were eight.

    Eight little critters, those passed now in heaven.
    One took fright, and then, there were seven.

    Seven little critters, one surrounded by chicks.
    One roused anger, and then there were six.

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    11 comments · 329 views
  • 452 weeks
    Cue evil laugh

    Thanks to my good friend RedShirt047 I have something planned for you all. A little mystery. And no, it's not something I mentioned in the past that I won't really do. I've already put work into this and got the plot all together.

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    4 comments · 314 views
  • 452 weeks
    Story

    Okay. I want to let you know a reason why this story has been delayed so much. A big part is because a while ago my brother rather blasted the recent chapter I was going to put up. It really crushed my spirits, which made me stop writing it. Figured you all need to know. That being said, I got a page done by now in the newest chapter. And yes, I still plan for the scene to be a bit similar to

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Feb
15th
2015

MORE issues · 3:13am Feb 15th, 2015

At this point, I'm having major story problems. My brother who is helping me edit wants a lot of things different. Meaning I might have to rewrite a shit load of my story and redo the plotline and such.

I just... Everything sucks.

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Comments ( 7 )

Dude don't let him dictate how the story should go! Just find another editor, there's always willing people here on fimfiction I think,

2797929 I've tried. I haven't found ANY.

2798042 I think in this situation it's better to just keep trying, rather than to have to rewrite big portions of the story again, and not even for your own vision this time. I find the idea of your brother telling you what should be happening in the story absolutely unacceptable. People manage to find editors somehow; I believe you can do it to - maybe look in some groups if you haven't done that already, I think there's specific groups where people who offer their editing services hang out. Personally, I would much rather wait for you to find one, or read your story unedited, than read it with the knowledge that it isn't being written how you want to do it, but rather how some other person wants you to do it,

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Btw, if you don't want him editing and taking over, I'll edit for you! I say this because if he did, this would be the 2nd major change, and I can't keep track of a story that keeps changing!

2798418 I know. I just, ugh, hate having this happen.

2798593 Might take you up on that.

2798839 In any case, I wish you the best of luck in finding an editor (see, already one potential candidate right here!) and implore you to not give up on your own ideas of what this story should be.

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