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Ocean Heart


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  • 254 weeks
    First Big Edit Spree

    So a few chapters are done and edited. To explain some changes, Spike and Nashta are now wingless properly, so a lot has changed in the series of events involving them. Sombra is more of a consistent dick rather than a spastic one with a lot clearer goals and better transitions/interactions. I'd love it if ya'll checked it out.

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  • 255 weeks
    I guess im fixing that old story

    Im alive, question is, was I ever dead in the first place?

    I hear all the problems my writing has. I like to think I've gotten better. So Im taking the stuff there now and revising a lot in as few sessions as possible to keep the mentality I need to have consistent action and motivations. I got super off track with what the story was and want to fix that.

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  • 324 weeks
    So since Fim won't update y'all

    New chapter up. Revision on the old one. Fim doesn't want to spam inboxes since its publish date was back in june...like two years ago. Finally back into it. Who knows where it goes from here, but I feel like there might be a small difference in my writing styles...

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  • 369 weeks
    It's almost Easter

    You all know what that meeeans...

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  • 401 weeks
    Recent chapter

    It sucked. It made me realized I had a huge continuity error and it tore my whole plot apart. Im going to rewrite it and adjust that plot to fit the error so that it wont change the whole story. Im very sorry for being so late admitting this. I was afraid of failing and just ignored it, praying it wouldnt be noticed. Im a bad guy. But I'll be working hard to fix it! Taking the chapter down for

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Feb
11th
2015

A choice · 7:38pm Feb 11th, 2015

So the new story is gonna be called Dark Matter; and I am faced with a decision...I want to make it a choose your own adventure with either Sombra as the pov or one of his slaves as the pov........or I could just make it Moonlight 2.0 and take the normal path.

So what would you all like to see? A choose your own love story or a horribly sad love story? Either is going to be a tad depressing but if I have full control you know im gonna torture them.

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