Feb
8th
2015
Newest Collaboration Story · 2:56pm Feb 8th, 2015
Hey there. Me and a couple friends are working together on a Humans in Equestria story. It got a lot of favorites early on, but not a lot of feedback. Just a few comments but not what im looking for. If you could please read and comment it would mean a lot to us.
The feedback i am looking for by the way is the normal stuff: What you liked, what you didn't like, a change you think i should make, and if it is not too much trouble for you to point out my spelling or grammatical errors that would be nice. Also, if you have an idea for something you want to see in the story, add that too. THANKS!
Read it.
Ain't too bad so far :).