Another new story coming along soon! · 5:11am Jan 21st, 2015
I have a new idea for a story that I've been working on in my spare time. I got the idea from another fic which is called Oh to be Old Again which can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35763/oh-to-be-old-again
This will be an Anthro fic in a society where herds are the norm.
This is a preview of it:
Two Alicorn colts stood in front of Miss Cheerilee’s class as she introduced the two former humans turned alicorn to the entire class.
“Everypony, I’d like you to meet two of our newest students today. They have just moved to Ponyville and are new and believe it or not they are both the first alicorn colts to ever exist! So treat them nicely. That goes double for you Diamond Tiara!” Cheerilee said to the young filly in question.
“Why should I, so they’re both alicorns. Big deal, they’re both freaks!” The filly said with a smirk.
“Diamond Tiara!” Cheerilee gasped.
“I mean look at that one. He’s missing an eye and he’s wearing an eye patch! And look at his cutie mark!” She said pointing to the back of the colt’s hand which had a cutie mark of cross hairs with a mask in the middle which had was half copper and half black with only one eyehole which was in the copper side of the mask. The colt simply slapped the filly’s hand away with anger.
“Piss off bitch.” The colt with the eyepatch growled at Diamond Tiara.
“Hey! Who do you think you are you freak!?” The filly shouted in anger as she rubbed her hand.
“My name is Deathstroke and I’m only going to say this once. Don’t fuck with me!” The assassin turned 14 year old alicorn said with anger in his voice.
“Oh don’t be like that Deathy.” The red alicorn colt said with a smile as he turned to the bratty filly.
“Oh don’t mind him, he’s just still upset that his wife shot his eye out when she tried to kill him. By the way, my name is Deadpool!” Deadpool said with a laugh. Miss Cheerilee could only stare at the little colt with pure shock and horror. Deathstroke on the other hand reacted differently.
“THAT’S IT DEADPOOL! YOU’RE DEAD!” Deathstroke screamed in pure rage as he pulled out a dessert eagle and fired at the laughing mercerny as he ran out of the school house saying.
“LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!” Deadpool laughed as he ran with Deathstroke hot on his heels while Miss Cheerilee was not too far behind Deathstroke as she tried to calm him down.
That's right! Deathstroke and Deadpool both get turned into 14 year old Alicorn colts!
The first chapter will be of a Psychological Evaluation of the two then the story will kick off as normal by beginning with them both waking up in Equestria.
Also, should I make it a romance as well?
P.S. What should I name it?
Nice do it do it do it
2737135 Oh don't worry, I will definitely do this story. I'm almost done with the first chapter believe it or not. I just need everyone to give me some ideas on what they think will be good in the story.
If you've seen the Death Battle between D. Pooly and Deathstroke, you'd know who'd win and why.
Also, for a name, Second Chances for Death's Friends.
A bit of a reference to D.P.'s relationship with the Grim Reaper herself.
umm...another story? cool i like it, but...does it mean, will slow down the writing? i mean. you write two story in other line story . it not really easy to think about it?
This story seems awesome.
Question, will this story come before or after your story with Sephiroth?
2737155 Death Battle is where I got the idea from.
2737239 My writing won't slow down, at least not on my Rurouni Kenshin fic. My Rurouni Kenshin fic takes top priority out of all my fics. I usually release the chapters monthly but if I could I would release a chapter every day if I could! But alas, I cannot
. When it comes to Kenshin, I will usually try to get the chapters out every 2 to 4 weeks.
2737971 Ahhh...i see...very well. it nay choice mate. but...will the story will became Mature or Teen?
i mean...it remind me a fic The Man Inside the Colt.
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2737161 I like the name, I might very well use it. As for what will happen in the story well Deathstroke and Deadpool are literally going to have to stick together and live together in order to survive.
This will happen:
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And definitely this
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2737977 It will be Mature because I decided to make it a romance (Sex and Gore), I have no idea how it will work but I will make it work! Also, there will be apart where Deathstroke and Deadpool fight against an army of Changelings in order to save Ponyville. They will have all of their gear too! Also they will will be required to do the #1 thing that may very well be the both the most hilarious and dangerous/deranged thing ever... They have to go to school!
"WHAT!!!"
Oh, hey Deathstroke.
"Do we get Chimichangas?"
...Yes.
"YAY!!!"
I'd say yes to the little romance...but only with Deadpool and Pinkie. But yes I love it so much...I don't know of a name but you can think it up.
Can't wait for it this story is goin to be a riot
2737991 The one about her crying should only happen AFTER Pooly and Pinkie hook up, because she is the only being in existence that could love him without even noticing the fact that he's essentially a walking talking tumour.
2738272 The only problem I'm having at the moment is that I can't seem to figure out how they should end up in Equestria. Got any ideas?
2738773 saddly I don't know how to start that out
2738042 Wow.....haha, you always make me some impressive story.
I can't wait to see it nay.
I have foreseen, with my endless wisdom and omnipotence, that this shall be the greatest thing to exist on the internet since robot fetishist pornography!
Name death pool rise to greatness
NO NO BAD keep working on Seeing is Believing I've been waiting MONTHS for a new chapter to come out but I also think this is a good idea just please update the story first or not you don't have to listen to me its just a suggestion.
2737458 Both will most likely be released around the same time.
To the hell yessss.
MAKE THIS NOW!!!!! I am going to laugh my ass off from this. Pinkie and Deadpool are gonna have so much fun. I wonder how all of Equestria will react to the walking talking tumour and the supersoulder.