Month of reading Day 17 · 8:14am Jan 18th, 2015

So I wrote this and lost it. So no real opening lets get to it.

Pillows is a janitor working at the castle in Canterlot. Basically, his life sucks. The only thing he can look forward to is his Saturday lessons with "Silent Chuck". Both princesses are mean to him, his apartment is the worst, and the pony he loves is an exact opposite of him. He can only hope for the best after each grueling day of his life.

Word Count: 11561

No, I did not like this. I didn't really find it funny even. The idea that Celestia has only one janitor for the whole palace is so ridiculous I can't even tell you. The princesses themselves were beyond OOC and you made Luna a complete imbecile.
Rating 1 out of 10

Rain
by CouchCrusader

One year after her return to Equestria, Princess Luna prepares to take her place in the world.

Word Count: 7550

Very beautiful. I enjoyed the discription of the stunner. I love storms like that they are so nice just to listen to. The way your story had Luna react to becoming Princess Luna again was just perfect.
Rating 9 out of 10

That Nagging Feeling
by GeodesicDragon

Princess Celestia has forgotten something. Something important.
But what the hell is it?

Word Count: 1238

Dawwww Filly Twilight is the most adorable filly ever. I'm struck wordless by her adorableness.
Rating 9 out of 10

Celestia and Luna's Completely Average Day
by Nyronus

A relatively normal day is disrupted when Luna learns that Orcus, the Demon Prince of Undeath, has escaped from Tartarus and is making his bid for conquest, starting with Ponyville. More horrifying though... is that fact that only she seems to care. Time is of the essence, and no one, Celestia included, seems worried about the impending disaster. Will Luna be able to rally the army, shake the citizens of Canterlot from their strange apathy, and save the day?
No. No she will not.
Everypony in this town is crazy.

Word Count: 15084

I... I am not sure what to say about this. The premise was good the end was nice with the sisterly bonding. Everything between the beginning and end... Yeah...
Rating 6 out of 10

The Candy Cane-Coated Conundrum
by Quisky

Luna has always known the tale of Hearth's Warming Eve, considering she was alive when the events transpired, but can she become accustomed to the modern day traditions that now revolve around the holiday?

Word Count: 9756

It is almost a month after Christmas and your story has gotten me right into the spirt again! So many warm and fuzzy feelings.
Rating 10 out of 10