An idea for a new story · 10:39pm Dec 22nd, 2014
Hey guys, Axel here. I just came up with an awesome idea for a new story that I've been thinking about for the past few days. It will be an Anthro harem crossover fic. The main character will be a guy hasn't been in enough MLP:FiM fanfic in my personal opinion. He will be given a second chance at life and a chance to redeem himself for his past sins.
Here is what I got so far:
The mane six were worried about the mysterious man that they found. They had never seen anything like him before. The six ponies felt bad for the man. When they talked to him in the hospital that morning they asked him who he was and if he knew how he got so badly injured. He told them that he had no memory of who he was or how he even got there to begin with. All he remembered was being disoriented and completely covered in his own blood as he walked by Rarity’s Boutique. When Rarity and Pinkie Pie saw him they both screamed at the sight of him just wandering around barely alive. He couldn’t even speak when they tried to ask him questions. Rarity ran off to get the guard who managed to rush the bleeding man to the hospital just in time. But when he got to the hospital he saw a bunch of mares in royal guard armor asking who attacked him. He told them he didn’t understand what they meant.
They explained that when the doctors treated him they found that all of his wounds were very severe and could only have been caused by a sword. The man explained that he could not remember anything, not even his own name. They guards even asked if his own herd was the cause of it and if they were abusing him. This only made the man confused since he didn’t know what they meant by the word ‘herd’. The guardsmares said that a full investigation would be performed and that his injuries were probably caused by some he knew. What surprised him the most was that his investigation was classified as a domestic violence case, this only confused him more. He couldn’t help but noticed the lack of stallions as well. It quickly dawned on him that this was a society that was run by females. He figured that it would probably be best that he just play along as to not offend.
The guardsmares were very polite throughout the whole questioning process and explained to him that he was suffering from a severe case of amnesia.
As he sat in the hospital bed the man could only wonder about who he was as he saw his black leather trench coat sitting on one of the drawers in his room. All the blood was cleaned off of it thanks to Rarity. Pinkie Pie and Rarity would visit the man every day to keep him company which he greatly appreciated. Rarity fixed his clothing for him to which he thanked her greatly.
“Think nothing of it darling! I simply love your attire, wearing all black makes you look edgy and strong, especially with that platinum mane of yours!” She said with a smile to which the man found himself smiling back for some odd reason. He didn’t smile often for some reason which struck him as odd. He often caught Rarity and Pinkie Pie staring at him with blushes on their faces.
Twilight Sparkle would always return asking him about his species, she always seemed to want to know everything about him. She even showed him a signed document that was from the princess saying that since he was the only human in Equestria he was automatically classified as a protected species and was therefore under the protection of the crown.
This surprised the man. But what intrigued him the most was the fact that the ponies looked a lot like a mixture between a human and a pony. They had fur, tails, ears on the top of their heads, hoofs for feet, and even muzzles. But yet they hand hands and walked upright like humans and wore cloths and lived in a civilized society.
The guards came back regularly to see if he got his memory back to which the answer would always be the same.
“No, I’m sorry.”
He asked them why they thought his injuries were caused by abuse, they pulled out a note and handed it to him, telling him that it was found on him when he came into the hospital. It read:
“You get one chance and one chance only, change your ways or you will suffer the same way as you did before - Sincerely A.”
As the man got up he walked over to the mirror and looked at his reflection. He examined his pale white face and his platinum colored hair. Many believed that he was so pale to the loss of blood and possible malnutrition. But he felt that this was how he always looked. His hair came down to the back of his thighs. But what caught his attention was his green cat like eyes. They disturbed him for some reason.
As he stared at his reflection he could only ask himself one thing.
“Just who am I?”
(That's right, it's Sephiroth as the main character!)
Please tell me what you all think in the comments below and give and feel free to give me some ideas as well. Also SiB is still alive. I'm just Focusing on my Rurouni Kenshin fic for now. I want to get a few more chapters posted before I work on anything else. A Swordman's Path to Redemption always take top priority when it comes to my fics. Also, this new will be something that I update when I can. But for now tell me what you all think so far.
P.S. I'm currently working on the next chapter of A Swordman's Path to Redemption
P.S.S. Feel free to give me ideas for a name for this upcoming fic. Also, this fic probably won't be coming out any time soon... Or maybe it will if we're lucky, who knows.
- Axel
1. I think it seems like a good idea. It sounds good and I'd love to read it.
2. Keep it in mind or right the idea down on some paper so you won't forget it.
3. Get your silly ass working on Kenshins story. Seriously, stop getting so many idea's and work on the shit your already doing. Stop being silly and be silly with your stories alright?
You got it my friend! *Salutes and begins typing the next chapter of Kenshin*
2671107 Thank you
I got to say that this idea looks great. You already do a great job with the fight scenes of your other fics, but I can't wait to see how you would pull off a FF fight. BTW, I think I know identidy of A, but I won't spoil.
I think this is a cool idea for a story I give you my support
2671107 Dude!
This story plan is freaking BRILLIANT!
Do it! it looks so awesome, and it looks like it has a lot of potential!
I will think of you as the greatest writer and author I have ever seen if you do this story. No lie.
I feel honored being followed by you Axel. Hell, I feel honored for anything that you do for me.
I just want to say, Good luck on the story and have an awesome christmas! :)
Great story idea and I CAN NOT wait for you to make the story ideas.
please start this story I smell a harem
3101563 Don't worry I'm almost done with the first chapter believe it or not.