Writing my First Story · 11:11pm Nov 28th, 2014
(title says it all so just let the magic sink in) ok now that you have done that what are your thoughts?
A buttery apple. What? You expected actual information on me here?
(title says it all so just let the magic sink in) ok now that you have done that what are your thoughts?
Fix your grammar.
Problem areas are:
Punctuation
Capitalization
Word confusion(your, you're)
That's it so far.
~TOOWC
Thank you very much.